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Autumn!!!
1/5/2012
I can feel the wind
brushing through my hair.
I can hear the leaves
crunching under my feet.
I can see the sun
glowing in my eyes.
I can see Autumn
is fading away.
WALT: observe and include specific details in our writing
SUCCESS CRITERIA
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SELF ASSESSMENT
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Includes four nouns (from observation)
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4/4
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Made the nouns do something
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4/4
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Started each new description on a new line
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4/4
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Extended each line so it makes more sense
(may include a who, where, why, what, when).
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4/4
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