It is interesting that you inserted your writing as an image, Brody. It looks like a newspaper clipping. Great choice to write it in the first person (as the character). The reader gets to know and connect to the character easily. Is there going to another Jimmy Junga instalment? I hope so!
Wow Brody and Poor Jimmy Junga!This piece of writing is a wonderful short piece. which makes it such a great story! The sold out tour is probably all jimmy junga ever got that he liked! What will happen next Brody?
It is interesting that you inserted your writing as an image, Brody. It looks like a newspaper clipping. Great choice to write it in the first person (as the character). The reader gets to know and connect to the character easily. Is there going to another Jimmy Junga instalment? I hope so!
ReplyDeleteWow Brody and Poor Jimmy Junga!This piece of writing is a wonderful short piece. which makes it such a great story! The sold out tour is probably all jimmy junga ever got that he liked! What will happen next Brody?
ReplyDeleteI like your writing Brody it has a lot of good sentences
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