Tuesday, June 5, 2012

Food Scraps








Persuading Food scraps
30/05/2012
Dear room 20,  

I think  room 20 are wasting too much food instead of making compost or donating it to people that starve. It is disgusting looking into room 20’s rubbish bin, there is so much food in there.

Reason 1. We could easily separate our food scraps from plastic and paper and other rubbish. And we could go around collecting other people's food scraps and less scraps would have to go to a landfill and there is more room for other things to go in.

Reason 2 . Or we could donate foods that we know we won't eat. People do starve and we could also help them and the landfills because that way more can fit in the landfill by simply donating food.

Reason 3. Also we could make worm farms and make compost. Simple to make and they don’t even take much and you don’t even have to watch it you can just leave it. Compost can help to make your gardens grow.   

Reason 4. We could buy less food that way we would even have more money for other things that we want.
DO NOT WASTE FOOD!!!

I think we should either buy less food  or not waste it. We should donate food we won’t eat to people that starve. You could even make a compost for your garden.      

Brody
        

7 comments:

  1. Amazing Brody,
    I love you fotobabble they are so good.
    I am one in the food scraps groups.
    What are you going to need to make a worm farm and how are you going to raise the money for the stuff.

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  2. Awesome persuasion Brody.
    I am also in the food scraps group and it sounds that you have done a great persuasion just like the girls that are in the group.
    What was your groups question?
    What do you think room 20s answer will be? ( YES OR NO ) Mine is definitely a YES.

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  3. Great Brody!
    I am obviously part of your group food scraps. I like your persuasion it is very persuasive!
    I also like how you used fotobabble for your persuasion as well!
    Do you think you could put a link on how to make compost or a worm farm?

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  4. Great Brody
    I like how you have put two fotobabble on you post.
    My answer is definitely a YES. Maybe you could do a poll and get people to vote a yes or a no?
    Great work

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  5. Cool Brody!
    I like the idea about giving food to staving people.
    Your persuasion is really good.
    Well done!

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  6. Wow Brody.
    Your Writing about food scraps is great. Did the food scrap group come up with any other Ideas?
    Your Fotobabble is awesome as well.
    What is your favourite reason why we shouldn't waste food?

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  7. Cool, Brody!

    I may not be in the food scraps, but that was a very persuading writing!


    Sincerely, Teva Tait.

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