Thursday, October 18, 2012

The Avengers strike on Loki

The Avengers Strike on Loki!!!

Once There were the Avengers but not all of them only The Hulk, Captain America and Iron Man. They were working in their labs trying to find who the newest criminal is. When suddenly they got a call from Thor. He said, “I have found the criminal it's the usual. Captain America tells Iron man to to put it on speaker. Captain America says “where are we looking at destination wise Thor. 
“How about this says Thor I will come pick you up in my spacecraft and we will go from there?" 

So the Avengers set off on their task. When Thor is on his way to pick them up his ship crashes right on the destination of he who shall not be named! So it is a bit weird having your brother as your enemy but he has a job he has to do! So when Thor recovers from his crash he is ready for action.The guys come to meet Thor at the mountain. 

LOOK!!! yells Captain America. Its LOKI!!! “Okey Thor are you ready to take your brother in?" says Iron Man.
"Its alright he was adopted I told you last time we went after him remember," says Thor. 
“Let's go” Shouted Captain America. They are ready for a fight (obviously only if they need to.) They approach Locie as if they were the best ever you know like a slow motion walk! When they get to him they explain to him "we're taking you in like all the other villains that we have had to go through. If you don’t come with us you will have to live with the consequences."
"What are they?" says Locie. 
"Well we will either have to take you to our craft in the air or we will have to put in a glass bowl you will have to live in forever because it is unbreakable," says Captain America. Loki refuses to go so Thor throws his hammer straight at Locie and they chuck him on the spaceship. When they get back to the craft they chuck Loki in the tiger proof glass bowl and press the red button so he is locked in until further notice. 

So Locie lay there unconscious while The Avengers sit down and have a cup of tea. Later on they go to check on Loki, he appears to have escaped, says Captain America.  "I know why," explains Thor. "He had his demigod sword and plus there is a giant hole there." Thor would know all about that since they're related. Thor has a chip that can locate Loki no matter where he is. They go out on the same trip again hoping that this time they can transfer Loki into a normal prison.



11 comments:

  1. Awesome Brody, I love the avengers.

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  2. Amazing Brody!
    I love your writing, it is spectacular! I love how you made up your own story in your own time.
    WELL DONE!

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  3. Amazing Brody!
    I like how you made them have a cup of tea!
    Are you going to make a part 2 with Black Widow and Hawkeye?
    Who is your favourite avenger?
    Mine is Hawkeye!

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  4. What a great story Brody it has good expression.

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  5. Awesome Brody!
    I love the movies and the avengers movie
    but your story made so much sense it was so much like the movie I find that so hard to do and you did an amazing job
    who's your favourite avanger?
    Well Done please write more of these because it very clever :)

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  6. Awesome Brody!
    The story is exiting and that's a cool pic.
    And you got a few funny things in the story.

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  7. Awesome Brody!

    I like how he just cuts through the ground with his demigod sword

    Sincerely, Teva, Tait (The crazy kid)

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  8. Wow Brody!
    I like the story!
    It makes it feel like there is a chapter 2!
    Is there?

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    1. I am not to sure yet but I will be thinking of ideas.

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