Friday, September 7, 2012

Plane wreck part 3

Plane wreck part 3

I am finding it hard to get up I am stuck under heaps and heaps and heaps and heaps of pieces of metal. I am trying too to get all these pieces of metal off me but I just can’t.

I ask everyone if they could help me. They try to help but it just doesn’t work. They can’t get all the metal off me. Someone has called the cops because I can hear the sirens creeping closer. The cop cars pull up to check the scene out.

The cops slowly walk up to me And say , Kid we're taking you in. So they must have found what I had done , I tried to explain what had happened but they didn’t care.

I was going under no matter what. When we got to the station my parents were not pleased to see me. Then they asked me what made me do something so stupid. So I tell them that I had to otherwise I could have died because there were some alien things that were going to eat me. Of course they were not going to believe me I sounded like a maniac. Nobody will believe you when you say alien in your sentence (Not even your family.) They told me I don’t even know how to light a match , so I pulled out my packet of matches and let one off.

They were amazed , But they still didn’t believe me. What was I going to do with my self.

To be Continued!!!                                                                                  

7 comments:

  1. I really like your personal voice in your writing. It makes it sound like you are talking- just like the best authors. Well done Brody

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    1. Thank you.
      I am really happy with this saga of writing.
      They could possibly be my favourite story's.

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  2. Wow Brody. I have read 3 of them they are amazing and awesome I love them. I can't wait till the next one keep making them they are amazing. Well done.
    From Amy. :)

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    1. Thank you Amy.
      It's nice to hear that your reading my work.

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  3. Awesome Brody.
    I love your plane wreck part 3. Hopefully you keep making more plane wreck storys.
    Well Done!

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  4. Awesome Brody this is an amazing piece of writing. You must be really proud of this. If you were in a plane and aliens were going to eat you, would you crash the plane?

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  5. Awesome Brody,
    It's so exciting I want to read more.

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